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Life is going on, even if we stop.
People keep passing by.
never seeing all the pain, focused on themselves.
wanting to go on, but slowly falling.

Lives all shattered.
souls crying out.
people smiling, but, inside they're dying...
©2008-2010 ~klipie245
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This is something I was shocked at when I realized it.
The world is passing by without caring. painful it truly is. so lets support each other.

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:iconohnoitsjoe:
Thanks for the fav!
The last line made me shiver. Soo true, it's our culture, it's how we live. We try to put on a happy front for everyone, and phrases like "how are you?" have become synonymous with "tell me about you life, but only if it's positive right now."
:iconklipie245:
Plsa!!! I agree, its actually sad that it is how and what we are.

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Its the unspoken words that tell the story...

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:iconalexrider-00nothing:
i've noticed that too. . .we are so so self centered. believe me, it's easy to be, but good reminder.


critique:
on your last phrase "people are smiling, but inside their dying" you'd say They're not their

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"not only for these do i pray, but also for those who will believe on me through their word"
John 17:20
:iconklipie245:
Thanks for the critique :) back then my English wasn't so good lol I'll change it thanks so much :)

But ya people are always focused on themselves and that's why the world is in it's current state....

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Its the unspoken words that tell the story...

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:iconalexrider-00nothing:
lol, mine has improved also. it seems that my English is better when i'm critiqing someone else's grammar. . .

no kidding

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"not only for these do i pray, but also for those who will believe on me through their word"
John 17:20
:iconklipie245:
Funny how that works actually lol I know what you mean, but fortunately by giving critique to others we ourselves learn something new...

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Its the unspoken words that tell the story...

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:iconalexrider-00nothing:
yes, we should at least

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"not only for these do i pray, but also for those who will believe on me through their word"
John 17:20
:iconklipie245:
Yep yep :)

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Its the unspoken words that tell the story...

My gallery: [link]

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